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[Tutorial 4]

Very Usefull And Full OF Information

It was truly one of the most helpful tutorial for me I've seen yet. I learned many things from this that I had trouble with from the past. Thank-you for making this tutorial.

Pros: Nice layout, very useful to beginners who want to know about advanced artwork, the music was nice, and everything was readable.

Cons: Some spelling and grammatical mistakes in there.

YK-Blaze responds:

ya i know my grammar sucks
thanks though!

[Sci0-Sh0t]

Ok, But Could Use With Some Shine

It was alright overall but let me point out some pros and cons.

Pros: It's pretty nicely drawn and it comes with pretty useful information on how to play. Pretty nice layout to be honest.

Cons: It's pretty repetitive. Theres not much of a point of it really it's just traveling. You could put on a scoreboard and what would be even better would be a highscore board. It's also easy to get killed, you should add a health bar.

Overall, it was quite enjoyable and I hope to see some improvements!

chillwhale responds:

thanx, its very true this is a simple game...exsept for x-mode there no a-o even to your enimes they are just traveling in a motion tween. Thats why the exsplotion are so speratic they are just link to another animation so it also at a certain distace from the middle its never been able to work out jsut right. As for a healt bar well i tryed and tryed to make that work. For the score board same problem! i could make them work in othe flash but not this one, wierd hun?

[Flash Programing Tutorial]

Front Page For Sure!

Just by looking you can tell it's a front pager. I've seen lots of things in the flash portal end up front page, and this one is going to be a front pager. More music would be good.

Al6200 responds:

Thanks, I sure hope it hits front page.

The whole music thing is a tough decision. Early on, I was strongly considering Psybot or Paragon X9, but you have to consider that adding another song adds 500kb+ to the filesize. I have to really balance things out amongst the different viewers. People with a blazing connection could really afford to have a couple extra songs, since a few megabytes don't really affect them. However, I'd have all the people on dial-up never being able to see it. Ultimately I think I made a reasonable compromise. Thanks for the comments though, they're much appreciated.